长相思――中秋节

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<font size="5"><font color="mediumturquoise">天圆圆，地圆圆，月儿高高洒银元，游子祝福圆；</font></font><font class="jammer">$ @+ w2 H* d; _8 x5 L! t' x</font><br>
<font size="5"><font color="mediumturquoise">心儿圆，梦儿圆，饼儿香香欢聚圆，世间莫圆圆。<font class="jammer">' G' W! \- Z&amp; e</font><br>
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意思很好，在格律上多商榷一下，管见！<br>
<span style="display:none">2 w! \$ n( i+ z% }1 q: ?</span>长相思 双调三十六字，前后段各四句三平韵、一叠韵。<br>
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<span style="display:none">! w&amp; t) z, ?6 B; n# D* Z</span>正体&nbsp;&nbsp;白居易<font class="jammer">6 C9 r) x) Y! P8 i6 r</font><br>
◎◎△, ●◎△(叠前韵)。○●○○●●△。○○●●△。<font class="jammer">" B, ^, [; J+ d2 h7 i5 k</font><br>
汴水流，泗水流。&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;流到瓜州古渡头。吴山点点愁。<br>
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思悠悠，恨悠悠。&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;恨到归时始方休。月明人倚楼。<font class="jammer">/ n6 ^, g4 ^7 e) l</font><br>
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世间莫圆圆<br>
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世间莫不圆</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-9-12 23:08</font> <img id="aimg_Yu8GY" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">+ O$ u, i% G&nbsp;&nbsp;x* i- F/ o</span>意思很好，在格律上多商榷一下，管见！<font class="jammer">( P&nbsp;&nbsp;e5 k" b% t. N4 j</font><br>
长相思 双调三十六字，前后段各四句三平韵、一叠韵。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">7 J2 A&amp; t4 v3 ]7 q' Y</font><br>
我不懂格律，全凭兴趣和感觉拼凑。以后有空了多向兄长学习啦！:)</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">拈花微笑 发表于 2011-9-13 13:58</font> <img id="aimg_QjKmJ" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">; O- k4 @" H; M, k' ^$ ~</font><br>
世间莫圆圆<font class="jammer">- P5 X7 `# ^8 @</font><br>
是否<br>
<span style="display:none">" w0 {* b8 c! C7 v&amp; [</span>世间莫不圆</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">( `% }/ X" a) O! A6 M! C5 I- l: v+ @</font><br>
呵呵，角度和立足点不一样。你也可以写“离人独难圆”啊！:)</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">可靠的浪漫 发表于 2011-9-17 23:32</font> <img id="aimg_PMI8K" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">/ X4 k&amp; l7 u* B</span>我不懂格律，全凭兴趣和感觉拼凑。以后有空了多向兄长学习啦！</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;V0 i6 g- Q5 U, Y6 R5 B; X</font><br>
相互学习！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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