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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-10-25 12:59 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">5 p( o5 u }6 S7 m! z2 y9 t</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4"> 斜阳下，每依黄犬望君来。</font></font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">土家人 发表于 2011-10-24 01:45</font> <img id="aimg_XRWcM" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">$ ~3 J$ C; b& g</span>:)诚谢。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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:):):):)呵呵，顶！！！！！！！！！！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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倚 改一个平声字 依字 更好。 早已经超越了那些所谓的高手、高手、高高手了！我很想把你引荐入《秀山诗联学会》，可是却怕把你带坏了，纠结哟！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-10-24 13:24</font> <img id="aimg_F2a5X" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">7 y7 }2 }# w. w9 P0 a; o</font><br>
倚 改一个平声字 依字 更好。 早已经超越了那些所谓的高手、高手、高高手了！我很想把你引荐入《秀山诗联 ...</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">( i6 d5 b9 s# b6 V( O" |: B# D</font><br>
谢无痕君了。我现在才会两种词呢，还得多多练啊。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-10-24 15:48</font> <img id="aimg_a11ZZ" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">+ ~/ T/ Y( s. ?; Q w</font><br>
谢无痕君了。我现在才会两种词呢，还得多多练啊。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">: }/ {( S4 t, k+ `1 z5 L* m/ d; T k</font><br>
说点点吧！夕阳 和 斜阳 一回事，但是 夕（古入今平） ，斜（古今皆平），于是在格律上就要活用了，于此也无伤大雅。再者，翠字犯重，对联还是不要犯重的！ 然则，翠姑是不能改的，要改哪里呢？想一下还是容易的，风吹绿竹千山碧，如此容颜依旧在，碧翠色！意境一点也没有改动而成功的避开了重字，多好！<font class="jammer">+ B' G5 @/ Z# v6 y</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-10-25 10:52</font> <img id="aimg_rnEVX" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">' p3 ?, ~) B1 Z8 K</font><br>
说点点吧！夕阳 和 斜阳 一回事，但是 夕（古入今平） ，斜（古今皆平），于是在格律上就要活用了，于 ...</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none"># C' `, z' H5 ?</span>:)我有时还是有些顾此失彼，注意这里，又忘了那里，很是生硬。<br>
<span style="display:none">* D0 [( K: D# J/ y</span>找个时间一定去拜访无痕君，我到镇中玩的时候还是多的。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-10-25 12:56</font> <img id="aimg_KdQkk" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">% Q0 |7 w. f+ Z3 h3 a( ?</span>我有时还是有些顾此失彼，注意这里，又忘了那里，很是生硬。<br>
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