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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">痛快，快哉之极！由一个小小问题就是犯‘四法同一’，何谓‘四法同一’，施著游照此四个动词均在同一律步，这样失去了格律诗的抑扬顿挫的音律感。</font></font><br>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-11-9 14:37 编辑 </i><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-11-9 14:36</font> <img id="aimg_rXW9Z" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">0 S! k* S1 ~+ `% m' T</span>哎,普通话没学好,律诗难整,我是有点奈不何了</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">1 B. U( G; C7 l6 ^- A</font><br>
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