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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-11-25 12:00 编辑 </i><br>
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两首绝妙的新韵！七律尤好，尽字相重，这样一首好律诗能不重字更好！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-11-25 14:25 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">! D j9 \, M- t% v8 w! ]</font><br>
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<span style="display:none"># f: Z3 v: t! \8 p</span><div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-11-25 14:13</font> <img id="aimg_qvv8S" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" src="http://www.cqxszx.net/static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer"> E* I3 Z: p; b3 @& g" @3 H</font><br>
其五七绝 兰草依栏浣女沐池汤，吊脚西施御晚妆。酥手轻摇蝶起舞，霜楼月浸溢馨香。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">0 p( X7 ?+ E e, k& `6 r" T: T</font><br>
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