七绝・青青子矜（记一个痴情女子）

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 不小心 于 2011-12-3 13:30 编辑 </i><font class="jammer"># C0 r# q&amp; a8 a, l# X$ z1 Y</font><br>
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<div align="left"><font style="font-size:12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">漫叩心弦两泪流，临湖听韵一痕秋。</font></font><br>
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<font size="3">再和一首</font><font class="jammer">. O$ f&nbsp;&nbsp;P3 Q* l, w7 _/ S. M: @: K3 U</font><br>
<font size="3">七绝</font><br>
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青丝絮盖头，<font class="jammer">- v$ V: [9 h1 T</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-11-29 12:43</font> <img id="aimg_j21Kh" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">: p% n7 |+ s/ j9 Y/ |</span>再和一首<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;k&amp; J' w7 m&amp; R1 D+ X7 a</span>七绝<br>
<span style="display:none">" @3 r! L( C9 M$ \: ]# o</span>伤心路上泪长流，一段相思一段愁。</blockquote></div><br>
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青春无奈水中流，流到清江一段愁。<font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;c1 _&nbsp;&nbsp;}&nbsp;&nbsp;l! F, Y9 {</font><br>
愁绝催杯明月夜，夜风扶柳冷轻裘。<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">爱情的刹割？ 发表于 2011-11-29 17:46</font> <img id="aimg_b3o33" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" src="http://www.cqxszx.net/static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">) Q) V% G5 e7 E% m2 d</span>青丝絮盖头，<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">爱情的刹割？ 发表于 2011-11-29 19:49</font> <img id="aimg_mJVmV" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">4 {# b8 B# s* V+ j5 n</font><br>
多谢师兄</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">4 f* H; Z9 e&nbsp;&nbsp;X! t4 C( A/ ~</span>我放弃《中华诗词论坛》的目的，就是要减少太多的文字应酬，尽可能抽点时间来这里和大家静心交流，相互学习，共同提高，因为我们这个自以为是的“全国诗词楹联文化先进县”压根、名不符其实，得很，得很哟！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-11-29 19:34</font> <img id="aimg_wLq0i" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(thi