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秋末寒风至，冬初白雪幽。<font class="jammer">, T3 z" a&nbsp;&nbsp;B3 G* h5 E. j</font><br>
酒心烧冷夜，朝醒现白绸。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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教你一个怎么甄别古今平仄的法门，点击“中华国粹网平仄查询对照”，绝大部分还是准确的。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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是不是又有不对的啊？<font class="jammer">$ v( b; D* G&nbsp;&nbsp;q</font><br>
我去看看，</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">凌娅弩 发表于 2011-12-2 09:31</font> <img id="aimg_HNtRq" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><font class="jammer">6 m' X2 j8 j$ t' Z. v. x&nbsp;&nbsp;\</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">爱情的刹割？ 发表于 2011-12-1 20:49</font> <img id="aimg_DjRHR" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;j) @* j3 x7 r6 }6 n</font><br>
是不是又有不对的啊？<font class="jammer">6 W( P&nbsp;&nbsp;@" q&nbsp;&nbsp;T7 U% r/ L' \7 C</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">* c* x* a' {' G9 C% c" ]$ D8 U</span>秋末寒风至，冬初白雪幽。<font class="jammer">' I0 W, }+ q( [7 Z* F8 [</font><br>
酒心烧冷夜，朝醒现白绸。&nbsp;&nbsp;不难看出这是一首五绝新韵，有两个提议，一白重字（诗虽然没有标明重字与否，还是尽量避免犯重，当然崔颢的“黄鹤楼”就重多了，却是一首脍炙人口的传世佳作，这只是异数。有规律的重字诗可以的，还有就是意境绝妙，改字反而害意。），冬初白雪幽（平平平仄平新韵）五言七言诗有孤平、孤仄之说，古来也有犯孤的诗句流传至今，也常有一些文者、笔者枚举了不少前人诸如此类犯孤平和孤仄的诗句。但是今天我们既然来学习传统诗歌，还是要从规范学起，然后再圆机活法，知常达变。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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