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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-12-13 10:34 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">: }+ b5 p&amp; A* r2 Q% w: [6 y</font><br>
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<font size="6">日暮寒风壮冷威，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">5 \&amp; Q! J$ j) N% I$ N</span><font size="6">瑶池玉露溢清辉。</font><br>
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<font size="6">泣望婵娟寄梦回。</font><br>
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:victory::victory:有空教教我。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">都市外乡人 发表于 2011-12-11 11:06</font> <img id="aimg_qNleF" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">- K3 v7 q# q. I; P# o</font><br>
有空教教我。</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">, Y# C5 g" b6 P5 e. E</span>我都才呆学呢</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-12-11 12:59 编辑 </i><br>
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这就搞对了三。昨夜月亮是红色的呢。{:soso_e100:}{:soso_e179:}<font class="jammer">( N' q8 }&amp; v9 a</font><br>
不过“火”字两侧是各两平声，还得注意啊<font class="jammer">6 h+ h: _; E$ q6 h5 K</font><br>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-12-11 13:05 编辑 </i><br>
<span style="display:none">0 N7 a9 q0 X) B( G" R</span><div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-12-11 12:56</font> <img id="aimg_Wz7LN" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" src="http://www.cqxszx.net/static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">0 X) P- I, \7 j</font><br>
这就搞对了三。昨夜月亮是红色的呢。<font class="jammer">; o/ Y8 ]% }" J* r% g</font><br>
不过“火”字两侧是各两平声，还得注意 ...</blockquote></div><br>
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<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;l" e, a3 O" w$ s</span>是前天晚上下班路上想起的，昨天晚上修改定稿。还请多指教</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-12-11 13:03</font> <img id="aimg_uAF1y" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">6 ?% |% g$ O( D) n</font><br>
是前天晚上下班路上想起的，昨天晚上修改定稿。还请多指教</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">7 W3 x- ]$ D" l' }: m* T</font><br>
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<font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">五绝一般第一个字可以变动平仄，七绝一般第一、第三个字</font></font><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">可以变</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">; @4 o+ V2 R2 c&amp; y+ p) }&amp; }</span><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">动平仄。但不要出现孤平、孤仄的情况。如“<font color="red">平平仄仄平</font>”</font></font><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">第一个字</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">4 Q9 ?6 p/ f) {/ Y' u/ k: L</span><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">平声就不能变了，“仄<font color="red">平</font>仄仄平”，就犯孤平了。<font color="red">平平平仄仄，仄仄</font></font></font><font class="jammer">5 D: A0 D' g, U0 g2 M4 M</font><br>
<font size="3"><font color="#9932cc"><font color="red">仄平平，仄仄平平仄</font>三种情况第一字的平仄可变。</font></font><font class="jammer">8 ~0 l. d+ A9 q9 n</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-12-11 13:33</font> <img id="aimg_olM22" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">! T5 F0 r2 |' p; X% u" r</span>五绝一般第一个字可以变动平仄，七绝一般第一、第三个字可以变<font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;H# v3 G( M0 |9 x: X" m- b</font><br>
动平仄。但不要出现孤平、孤仄的情况。 ...</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">+ x4 w- c1 i# d- T&amp; g" i</font><br>
不是可以用后面的句式来拗救吗？</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-12-11 13:47</font> <img id="aimg_V0EE5" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">3 w' W4 B% r% a, v9 y</font><br>
不是可以用后面的句式来拗救吗？</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">$ j9 m&amp; v$ d2 s</font><br>
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<font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">五绝一不论，七绝一、三不论，七律一、三、五不论，</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">. t&nbsp;&nbsp;m% b: K8 {- U</span><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">但要在不犯孤的情况下。我也是才开始学，不过才开</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">- e0 F. l3 A&amp; B8 D</span><font size="3"><font color="darkorchid">始学呢最好先入正格为好。</font></font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-12-11 14: