七律 八仙湖

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-12-16 15:51 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">1 d' I# f0 [" x0 ^&amp; x</span><font size="6">断水为湖谓八仙，</font><font class="jammer"># k3 c7 U, J" J- w</font><br>
<font size="6">群峦若黛佩玉边。</font><br>
<span style="display:none"># U; T&amp; e&amp; h. k" }9 M4 t% c% a</span><font size="6">朝迎旭日嬉轻雾，</font><font class="jammer">+ b5 z* {- ]2 A5 W- H5 B; N</font><br>
<font size="6">晚伴残阳逗彩昙。</font><font class="jammer">: |0 d" ]( @2 y' p</font><br>
<font size="6">G乃一声波作路，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; y; K; ?( S! K&nbsp;&nbsp;n4 U1 Y/ P6 d3 K</span><font size="6">村歌几句岸如禅。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">" A3 g" Q&nbsp;&nbsp;u0 j" h6 ^</span><font size="6">寻无旧迹仙家遁，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">9 b2 v- G4 l" B&nbsp;&nbsp;Z* S</span><font size="6">碧浪涟猗漾半山。</font><br>
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<font size="6">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;</font><font size="4">吉首市河溪镇河溪水库，雅名八仙湖。传库区水下原有一洞，曾引八仙小住。</font><font class="jammer">0 `1 ^' C1 s1 l&nbsp;&nbsp;j7 i; |1 `</font><br>
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:victory::victory:支持原创</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:victory::victory:拜读来了！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">杨稳 发表于 2011-12-15 10:16</font> <img id="aimg_u7YYc" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">% \% ?( }&nbsp;&nbsp;b) d4 W1 e. I</font><br>
支持原创</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">2 ^) d* v2 H3 s! Y+ B; `/ U</font><br>
多谢！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">都市外乡人 发表于 2011-12-15 10:18</font> <img id="aimg_tH43R" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">1 i: @: q0 i. f</span>拜读来了！</blockquote></div><br>
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<font size="4">你有文字底蕴所以容易上手，此篇就不错了，虽然有些瑕疵，打磨即可！</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">3 V; y8 h# ?0 P, C3 A</span><font size="4">断水为湖谓八仙，</font><font class="jammer">( V4 W2 [&nbsp;&nbsp;]7 y&amp; R</font><br>
<font size="4">仄仄平平仄仄平。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">% F&nbsp;&nbsp;f9 q" G- M8 r( Q</span><font size="4">群峦若黛佩玉边。<font class="jammer">$ p# J&nbsp;&nbsp;@8 u3 m- l</font><br>
平平仄仄仄仄平。</font><font class="jammer">0 z&amp; p" _2 c" y- u! d2 ^</font><br>
<font size="4">朝迎旭日嬉薄雾，薄（古入今平）此律当按古韵对待，不然“八”就出律。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">9 D# {+ y# L+ S0 k! O+ Q/ t" e- m</span><font size="4">平平仄仄平仄仄，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">, K) Z4 T&nbsp;&nbsp;O- n&amp; Z</span><font size="4">晚伴夕阳逗彩昙。夕（古入今平）、斜（古今皆平）。<font class="jammer">, a7 ?5 p1 a( M+ N$ n. L' A</font><br>
仄仄仄平仄仄平。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">/ }: a3 m( d2 J4 C5 u# Y8 @8 h</span><font size="4">G乃一声波作路，G（可平可仄）一（古仄今可平可仄）。<font class="jammer">6 S* W! v! D9 s</font><br>
仄仄仄平平仄仄，</font><font class="jammer">- A- i$ l' ~3 I: T</font><br>
<font size="4">村歌几句岸如禅。几（古可平可仄）。</font><font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;z" G&nbsp;&nbsp;A1 {9 p1 ?7 Y</font><br>
<font size="4">平平仄仄仄平平。</font><font class="jammer">) x&nbsp;&nbsp;h$ {. G$ W6 [; O</font><br>
<font size="4">寻无旧迹仙家遁，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">+ n) H! m$ D9 p2 d: d7 z, Z5 ^</span><font size="4">平平仄仄平平仄，</font><br>
<span style="display:none"># F( o( K$ d" t- r+ y+ ~4 T</span><font size="4">碧浪涟猗漾半山。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">/ O) o9 ~* }) _4 ~</span><font size="4">仄仄平平仄仄平。</font><font class="jammer">! K. j1 l9 k4 k. ^</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">6 i" Y! z4 O8 Z; h" j, M0 D</span><font size="4">全诗可改两字：薄，夕。加油！<font class="jammer">* V$ r+ ^; [) Q' B0 o) G</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-15 14:03</font> <img id="aimg_x08mf" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">. `% }1 N' ^( U</font><br>
你有文字底蕴所以容易上手，此篇就不错了，虽然有些瑕疵，打磨即可！<font class="jammer">7 R2 E2 u+ R- V* r</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">6 r9 b4 [; T9 q- a</span>断水为湖谓八仙，</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">/ _&amp; u# L, R$ y</span>也就是说薄，夕都改为仄声？</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-15 14:03</font> <img id="aimg_o9hqw" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">: B# R( K&amp; i0 a. j, f) `4 ]) q</span>你有文字底蕴所以容易上手，此篇就不错了，虽然有些瑕疵，打磨即可！<font class="jammer">9 d/ z9 J1 l9 S1 E0 S/ L</font><br>
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断水为湖谓八仙，</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">, l( ~* i; U2 u) T</span>八出律，那玉也出律了</td></tr></tbody></table>


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