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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-12-25 16:27 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">& X- X) c1 T L- s8 t</font><br>
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平安夜,圣诞节,本来是基督教纪念日,在咱中国却成了情人互赠苹果的日子.互赠苹果倒也不是坏事,可是把一两块钱买的一个苹果,再花几块钱去包装好象大可不必.苹果吃了,满地的垃圾处理起来可不容易.<br>
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<span style="display:none">6 c8 k" h" c ]( k1 }' k</span><font size="6">平安圣诞夜相依,<font class="jammer">7 x5 O% } c3 i/ `0 ]</font><br>
苹果穿衣当重仪.<br>
<span style="display:none">1 r0 [5 Y0 \2 u1 w: ]</span>信仰无须分国界,<br>
<span style="display:none">/ x% y$ }+ y' f</span>感情未必效欧西.<br>
<span style="display:none">! v+ n8 z# ~* r7 D! S6 H# y: r' r</span>平安美意托苹果,<font class="jammer">2 D1 f! J- \0 I( W% S</font><br>
废弃包装蔽地息.<font class="jammer">5 |" D8 R. s0 |, n. B8 Z</font><br>
可笑潮人学礼制,<br>
<span style="display:none">: U/ c! H, V1 x3 T</span>文明不讲养奢习. <br>
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:victory::victory:还是我好，一个人的平安夜，既节约又环保！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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祝大家平平安安:victory::victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">乡春 发表于 2011-12-25 13:49</font> <img id="aimg_tDYy7" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">- \* r3 A$ i8 k: Q, S</font><br>
祝大家平平安安</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">9 C( n$ `/ y5 P. U</span>也祝你岁岁平安</td></tr></tbody></table>
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恋 蔽 两字出律了，换两个平声字，还有 包装 反重。现在只能按新韵对你的诗指正。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-25 14:24</font> <img id="aimg_F02Rp" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">& G. T. `7 U7 l" W% |# n2 @8 [</font><br>
恋 蔽 两字出律了，换两个平声字，还有 包装 反重。现在只能按新韵对你的诗指正。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">& Y; {+ t$ Z0 `% [; E</font><br>
多谢赐教,我也只能做新韵.废弃包装蔽地息.仄仄平平仄仄平.<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-25 14:24</font> <img id="aimg_nf000" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">& K' \, B4 D: r3 F" j! U% Y</span>是不是都要注明是新韵?</td></tr></tbody></table>
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:lol:lol</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-12-25 16:41</font> <img id="aimg_oWfuw" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">) Z& O9 I8 q: T$ }+ m, T</font><br>
是不是都要注明是新韵?</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">* J. X0 f" O% `</font><br>
平水韵不须注明，新韵还是要的，不然读者就会迷惑了。按平水韵，此律就问题大了！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-26 09:40</font> <img id="aimg_D5psX" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">! a" N3 ^8 B* f6 F& P</font><br>
平水韵不须注明，新韵还是要的，不然读者就会迷惑了。按平水韵，此律就问题大了！</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">. O5 s9 U( u; l! ^</span>那我都注明是新韵,因为我作的都是以普通话为韵的</td></tr></tbody></table>
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好:victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>
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