七律 问天（一）

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 都市外乡人 于 2012-6-17 12:22 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">0 j4 ?' P3 x! S2 V/ r&nbsp;&nbsp;z</font><br>
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&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font size="5">复兴大业定有酬，</font></div><div align="center"><font size="5">神九飞船天际游</font></div><div align="center"><font size="5">二次对接显睿智<br>
<span style="display:none">- r4 |* x1 r) q&amp; x# W" I/ q2 v* G' H</span>三英赴会数风流</font></div><div align="center"><font size="5">问天阁内群贤聚<br>
<span style="display:none">, {7 K4 `1 p$ s; }% |3 @4 `</span>玉兔宫里众女羞<font class="jammer">; ]8 I# P% h( X7 J&nbsp;&nbsp;e$ a+ ~! }</font><br>
梦想飞天抒壮志</font></div><div align="center"><font size="5">苍穹敢问造几楼</font></div><div align="center"> </div><div align="center"> </div><div align="center"> </div><div align="center"><font size="4">祝贺中国载人航天工程第九次飞行胜利完成既定任务，圆满成功！</font></div></td></tr></tbody></table>


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<font size="5">苍穹敢问造几楼<br>
<span style="display:none">/ n&amp; }, C: A) j) q9 R( l. g2 p</span>航天飞行显英雄<br>
<span style="display:none">/ ]4 ]* t: _- |8 _5 P5 y5 G) S+ @</span>沉睡之龙已觉醒<font class="jammer">" m+ v+ }, @7 j: k# F' H1 y</font><br>
喜看神九问天庭</font></td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2012-6-24 23:06 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">7 `: G7 y6 s4 y</span>复兴大业定<font color="red">有</font>酬，</font><font size="5">神九飞船天际游。<br>
<span style="display:none">! B2 d! c# g' o" o$ c' O</span></font><font size="5">二次对接<font color="red">显</font>睿智，三英赴会数风流。<br>
<span style="display:none">' z1 {. O$ M&amp; D- z( [</span></font><font size="5">问天阁内群贤聚，玉兔宫<font color="red">里</font>众女羞。<br>
<span style="display:none">, o- d9 w" V9 U</span>梦想飞天抒壮志，</font><font size="5">苍穹敢问造几楼。<br>
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<span style="display:none">3 D* O8 Y! W' L8 M0 \4 U</span>欣赏，问好！<font class="jammer">' \5 X$ p9 h% S</font><br>
有、显、里三应平，可再酌。比如“里”可改“中”。个见。<br>
<span style="display:none">: D9 o6 B' i( J</span>一般字数1、3、5可平可仄，但应避免孤平与三仄尾。<br>
<span style="display:none">. M/ a7 {: ?: n# x&nbsp;&nbsp;B. {" I</span>“<font color="#ff0000">显</font>睿智”为三仄尾。</font></td></tr></tbody></table>


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