七绝・准风月谈

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<span style="display:none">/ C: n) H3 y) c: \7 R- X' \</span>一地飘茵几段情，百年名校自难撑。<br>
<span style="display:none">. y4 D2 @% \. K- Q8 h</span>流光湿透天心阁，千载回龙待点睛。<font class="jammer">+ k6 q' K, r&amp; x</font><br>
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:victory::victory::victory:<font class="jammer">; p$ \- e4 X3 @' J! e: A. H9 q</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">) W0 a6 U2 j! r</span>最好楼主能来点解说，不然看不懂理解不了楼主的意思，到不了楼主的意境。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 不小心 于 2011-9-26 17:12 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">4 u' v) x% ?9 U" X</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">七绝・一树繁华几段情</font></font><font class="jammer">! R; G&amp; G1 X, @! i9 v- L- k: i</font><br>
<font face="黑体"><font size="4">一树繁华几段情，飘茵落溷坠花轻。</font></font><font class="jammer">/ {! Z( m( x; l0 N</font><br>
<font face="黑体"><font size="4">生平际遇帘招隔，紫陌红尘乱点睛。</font></font><font class="jammer">9 M8 V3 K3 t3 t2 F! y&amp; y</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">5 ?+ O% e; x$ U</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">隔墙飞过坠花轻，一树繁华几段情。</font></font><font class="jammer">* H. z) m: K1 N* Z+ V&nbsp;&nbsp;S5 |6 O+ Y</font><br>
<font face="黑体"><font size="4">折柳章台多别恨，月池萍碎泪凝睛。</font></font><font class="jammer">7 C&nbsp;&nbsp;B: ^3 Y, `</font><br>
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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">待月池台凝露轻，落红难缀惹瞳睛。</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">, {. R&nbsp;&nbsp;s8 `" I&nbsp;&nbsp;K</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">抛家傍路寻郎去，一树繁华几段情。</font></font><br>
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<font size="5">和一首</font><br>
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<font size="5">一池飘萍几段情，</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">9 U# W) j( Z/ S- F0 A</span><font size="5">何须泪洒天心阁，</font><font class="jammer">8 R3 w1 L) b4 |: r</font><br>
<font size="5">自有后进点瞳睛。</font><font class="jammer"># W/ l* Z! s# J# @6 y</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-9-26 13:11</font> <img id="aimg_XQnzk" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">+ ]: A4 z% I5 Y( Y# I) N</span>和一首<br>
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<span style="display:none">7 N, q" m! i* N; f$ d% `3 M</span>一池飘萍几段情，</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">) h&amp; N5 |+ s/ X* f* K' C</font><br>
一水飘萍几段情，<br>
<span style="display:none">6 _/ D1 D' b" {, }5 |7 Z- W</span>章台三尺莫看轻。<font class="jammer">8 x' D8 U&nbsp;&nbsp;e&amp; [- w8 \</font><br>
何须泪洒天心阁，<font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;F1 a4 }. x0 l</font><br>
自有朱丹点彩睛。<br>
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<span style="display:none">6 g: d$ c- G3 u3 u- H8 O6 Z</span>尺&nbsp;&nbsp;看&nbsp;&nbsp;古通用&nbsp;&nbsp;改过就和律了！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<font size="5">谢了！</font><br>
<span style="display:none">( |; s9 E5 j7 p' v" b</span><font size="5">仅仅几字的改动，却提升七绝诗的层次。</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-9-26 13:11</font> <img id="aimg_F4p1h" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">; k7 h2 X8 z1 b! K- t! T</font><br>
和一首<br>
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一池飘萍几段情，</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">3 Q" r3 ]- z3 J: G</span>赞赏这个和</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-9-26 17:14</font> <img id="aimg_xpRAM" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">+ |* X3 T1 M" ]4 u9 l+ n</font><br>
一水飘萍几段情，<br>
<span style="display:none">6 u) N! ]&nbsp;&nbsp;r! l</span>章台三尺莫看轻。<font class="jammer">" O( D$ r9 F7 K. }</font><br>
何须泪洒天心阁，</blockquote></div><br>