找回密码
 立即注册
搜索
热搜: 活动 交友 discuz
查看: 470503|回复: 0

六律・这是一个农民(六首)

[复制链接]

8万

主题

0

回帖

2

积分

新手上路

积分
2
发表于 2019-4-7 16:07:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<div class="pct"> <div class="pcb">

<div class="t_fsz">
<table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td class="t_f" id="postmessage_1442632">
<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 不小心 于 2011-9-30 13:31 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">% }! n+ u6 T4 U. L&amp; y</font><br>
<br>
<span style="display:none">. A1 J/ y/ U/ O" {. ?. U1 {7 S; K) c</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><p style="line-height:30px;text-indent:2em;text-align:center">六律・无痕是我<br>
<span style="display:none"># m( h: }2 W( g2 A- R/ ^$ ~9 w</span>吟诗允许无痕,煮句探花月门。<font class="jammer">1 _8 S, F2 I( ~</font><br>
醉里挑灯看剑,庭中步影寻根。<font class="jammer">- k" i. y* Z8 v' `( P* f</font><br>
香笺一旦搓细,蝶梦三更搅浑。<br>
<span style="display:none">/ y( u: u! Z5 M. S3 X" [$ D</span>又把阳关唱彻,痴人独卧孤村。<br>
<span style="display:none">3 L7 W- }* w&amp; b8 ~9 ?</span><br>
<span style="display:none">$ M% W+ |; k! o7 ^8 u4 X</span>六律・我是无痕<font class="jammer">4 {2 ?. m0 {9 ^' Z2 L0 g, v</font><br>
月下花前听琴,朦胧一颗春心。<br>
<span style="display:none">* e0 s&amp; Q" V/ G3 S$ L</span>枝头缱绻红杏,画角潆洄玉音。<br>
<span style="display:none">, X; Y8 [+ }; B" F# t7 u2 F, M7 t</span>落落空云促拍,遥遥恨水难擒。<font class="jammer">: g% ?/ L4 R* k% ]( @</font><br>
湖风不解残醉,倚树抽丝浅吟。<font class="jammer">- c/ _5 Y6 ?/ s, z5 a; L3 R</font><br>
<br>
<span style="display:none">0 D: _0 t! U/ D1 L</span>六律・有痕无痕<font class="jammer">* T6 S7 y5 T; O, r6 U&nbsp;&nbsp;~</font><br>
花移月影风咏,夜半无痕得令。<font class="jammer">0 _/ _# o0 c/ S8 L</font><br>
字里行间仄平,怀中枕底清净。<font class="jammer">2 _, Y: W' J2 M7 g</font><br>
金科棣篆瑶瑶,玉律铿锵炳炳。<font class="jammer">" K0 l2 @6 _8 Z1 Q' _+ k4 x&amp; C) f</font><br>
唯有情怀细搓,呻吟肯准无病。<font class="jammer">% ~, d" n- J* E* u. P</font><br>
<font class="jammer">4 e$ S9 G+ {' j+ R* h2 A</font><br>
六律・无痕有痕<font class="jammer">4 Y" I" {: h&amp; ?. b&nbsp;&nbsp;^4 y. B</font><br>
对月摇花半树,星河耿耿遥路。<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;z6 o$ {. H$ y% }&nbsp;&nbsp;H3 N. f</span>溪前柳黛苍苍,屋后藤条素素。<font class="jammer">0 M! {: E3 r: e5 |( X</font><br>
即兴和风满怀,闲情险韵无数。<font class="jammer">8 D5 x3 S8 k1 s</font><br>
分曹细惹红情,坎上荷杯煮句。<br>
<span style="display:none">7 N- ]. B$ w6 ?0 q: b</span><br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;K, X- m+ G0 M+ a. b$ R</span>六律・寂寞<br>
<span style="display:none">- J: i) O1 p" ]3 y# \</span>遥遥一树花色,烛影楼中灭明。<br>
<span style="display:none">+ ]6 A! v2 Q1 j- f</span>水夕敲钟半夜,阶前把酒多情。<br>
<span style="display:none">$ j- K* q: x4 S6 h( L% b; n) v</span>流连碾转唐韵,缱绻潆洄笛声。<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;T% X" E/ }$ T. d</span>肯准郎边梦话,依然寂寞围城。<br>
<span style="display:none">; `$ {, v9 H$ |. f</span><br>
<span style="display:none">1 @5 ~5 F% W/ j+ U$ f, ^</span>六律・淡泊心志<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;D, K* r+ q4 W3 \. |5 _</span>为爱何须恨生,嗟叹枉自多情。<br>
<span style="display:none">7 X8 C9 E2 @' H: \&amp; d$ M</span>才将态度端正,且把心潮抚平。<font class="jammer">1 \2 C/ D&amp; f( d</font><br>
月下沿街买酒,庭中倚树吹笙。<br>
<span style="display:none">% f# k* `) s/ \: Q- @. {. u# L; \, e</span>无痕梦也从此,冷暖炎凉不惊。<font class="jammer">5 l&nbsp;&nbsp;`! t8 D0 L; ~</font><br>
<br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; ~% k) Z$ A3 Y3 s9 u, D2 U8 ^</span>注:六言律诗”是根据古代五律、七律诗体发展衍生而来的一种近代新诗体,具体是指每篇八句、每句六个字的律诗。简称六律。六言律诗是律诗的一种,律诗是近体诗范畴。律诗是由八句组成,有严格的格律要求。根据每句字数,律诗分为五言律诗、六言律诗、七言律诗。当前所言近体诗一般少涉及四、六言。和五言律诗、七言律诗比,六言律诗比较少见,不过从全唐诗看,有四律、六律。唐宋及以后诸代,六言绝句虽然较少,六言律诗却更为少见。明人陆时雍道:“诗四言优而婉,五言直而倔,七言纵而畅,三言矫而掉,六言甘而媚,杂言芬葩,顿跌起伏。” <br>
<span style="display:none">1 U# R% J9 g2 t) u9 q+ m/ `" G, t</span><font class="jammer">0 o' `' T2 ]4 b2 D5 Q" x</font><br>
附六言律诗叶韵格式:<br>
<span style="display:none">: Q* H" u/ U# b. q/ j</span>【平起首句押韵格式】 <br>
<span style="display:none">; S, G1 c4 }! {8 d$ F; I! k- F</span>平平仄仄平平(韵),仄仄平平仄平(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">( o# ~6 @* |5 b# |$ O8 S; B</span>仄仄平平仄仄,平平仄仄平平(韵)。(对仗) <font class="jammer">* y0 q8 x! q9 a3 Z% k</font><br>
平平仄仄平仄,仄仄平平仄平(韵)。(对仗) <font class="jammer">1 m. m; w# U/ L* }</font><br>
仄仄平平仄仄,平平仄仄平平(韵)。<font class="jammer">8 Y&amp; Y1 n) u5 N6 c</font><br>
<font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;l: A4 ^8 d$ M% Z</font><br>
【仄起首句押韵格】 <br>
<span style="display:none">: \. E8 U&amp; E) G" G. V</span>仄仄平平仄平(韵),平平仄仄平平(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">$ e+ w# i0 _: ~0 }</span>平平仄仄平仄,仄仄平平仄平(韵)。(对仗)<br>
<span style="display:none">2 S* A) _. g6 e: o+ u$ w3 c+ j/ q</span>仄仄平平仄仄,平平仄仄平平(韵)。(对仗)<font class="jammer">7 b; J3 v4 j! }&amp; P- }</font><br>
平平仄仄平仄,仄仄平平仄平(韵)。<font class="jammer">% x! ~+ Y( ~. \1 a- u</font><br>
<br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; z% J* v, D* X! t* M</span>【仄声韵】 律诗押仄声韵【平起式】<font class="jammer">; D$ |6 w* D8 _# B&nbsp;&nbsp;X' F$ @</font><br>
平平仄仄平仄(韵),仄仄平平仄仄(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">; V$ A0 G3 I: o7 D6 I' o</span>仄仄平平仄平,平平仄仄平仄(韵)。(对仗)<font class="jammer">- U( H! p9 f/ [% G3 v; Y+ Q</font><br>
平平仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄仄(韵)。(对仗)<br>
<span style="display:none">; B4 q. ^/ I2 T" V' w</span>仄仄平平仄平,平平仄仄平仄(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">$ `9 |6 ?&amp; T8 z$ Q! \$ T) z</span><font class="jammer">- n&nbsp;&nbsp;Z, Z3 A! Y% C4 p5 j; e/ s</font><br>
【押仄声韵・六言律诗仄起式】<font class="jammer"># C( q- m% k# e( O) y+ A</font><br>
仄仄平平仄仄(韵),平平仄仄平仄(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">. {" T. P+ C- {2 U# q</span>平平仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄仄(韵)。(对仗) <font class="jammer">% l+ K- N- P6 }) w; G4 `</font><br>
仄仄平平仄平,平平仄仄平仄(韵)。(对仗)<font class="jammer">&amp; T% ~, y) C) u- V( A</font><br>
平平仄仄平平,仄仄平平仄仄(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">! S1 E4 l, m/ S0 D) ~- d</span><br>
<span style="display:none">3 W% M0 j# X7 N6 g" O, |9 f% G</span><font class="jammer">, n, a3 Y- q: o) I) n</font><br>
<br>
<span style="display:none">+ u. U- B+ v" [) ~; H) D</span><br>
<span style="display:none">/ M# b9 N4 o# g# s</span></p></font></font></font></font></td></tr></tbody></table>


</div>
<div id="comment_1442632" class="cm">
</div>

<div id="post_rate_div_1442632"></div>
</div>
</div>,<div class="pct"><div class="pcb">
<div class="t_fsz">
<table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td class="t_f" id="postmessage_1442756">
:):):victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>


</div>
<div id="comment_1442756" class="cm">
</div>

<div id="post_rate_div_1442756"></div>
</div>
</div>,<div class="pct"><div class="pcb">
<div class="t_fsz">
<table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td class="t_f" id="postmessage_1442770">
填词 难搞!楼主人才</td></tr></tbody></table>


</div>
<div id="comment_1442770" class="cm">
</div>

<div id="post_rate_div_1442770"></div>
</div>
</div>,<div class="pct"><div class="pcb">
<div class="t_fsz">
<table cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr><td class="t_f" id="postmessage_1442859">
<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">原来的我 发表于 2011-9-29 10:59</font> <img id="aimg_RRXnN" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">7 I! M- @# C; K$ T: a! H$ k0 T( L$ W</span>谢谢赏读拙笔!</td></tr></tbody></table>


</div>
<div id="comment_1442859" class="cm">
</div>

<div id="post_rat
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

本版积分规则

Archiver|手机版|小黑屋|秀山社区 ( 渝ICP备14006173号-10 )

GMT+8, 2026-1-14 00:17 , Processed in 0.028942 second(s), 19 queries .

Powered by Discuz! X3.5

© 2001-2025 Discuz! Team.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表