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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2012-2-11 11:29 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">* a&nbsp;&nbsp;V5 ?- L% O' `' Q6 h+ R( X, Z</font><br>
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<font size="6"><font color="red">姚</font>冶风光入眼来，</font><font class="jammer">/ r0 u3 y0 s. @( S+ g</font><br>
<font size="6"><font color="red">兵</font>戈铁马岂徘徊．</font><font class="jammer">0 e$ ]( @. c% A* O1 E% w</font><br>
<font size="6"><font color="red">岩</font>边林内皆福地，</font><font class="jammer">" n+ {* j6 @4 r- d4 Y- n</font><br>
<font size="6"><font color="red">豹</font>走狼行视美差．</font><br>
<span style="display:none">' M8 R; f: l; I% p2 r" v</span><font size="6"><font color="red">随</font>意荒山常自在，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">* B5 X4 F4 q, `6 v% _</span><font size="6"><font color="red">遇</font>艰野径越开怀．</font><br>
<span style="display:none">" `, Y9 Y3 \, U) L&amp; B; ?- @0 T</span><font size="6"><font color="red">而</font>今健步征乡土，</font><font class="jammer">9 b&nbsp;&nbsp;K: V; i5 [3 \- i. \' r</font><br>
<font size="6"><font color="red">安</font>逸生活实快哉．</font><font class="jammer">. ?# p! D7 S&nbsp;&nbsp;g</font><br>
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:lol:lol:victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2012-2-10 21:47 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">4 H7 D5 _4 k9 {0 t% k$ C7 ]</font><br>
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<font size="4"><font color="#ff0000">姚</font>冶风光入眼来，<font color="red">兵</font>戈铁马尽悠闲。</font><font size="4"><font color="#ffffff">v2 q<br>
<span style="display:none">. R7 N) l/ _( o- |</span></font><font color="red">岩</font>边林内皆福地，<font color="red">豹</font>走狼行视美差。<br>
<span style="display:none">7 S; t" Q2 |# q# s* K$ S0 q8 W) h</span><font color="red">随</font>意荒山常自在，<font color="red">遇</font>艰野径更开怀。<font class="jammer">* z$ c+ Y" W3 Q- ?6 Y) g</font><br>
<font color="red">而</font>今健步征乡土，<font color="red">安</font>逸生活实快哉。</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">% [5 v5 L! _8 x</span><font size="4">农兄新韵藏头七律，很好。</font><font class="jammer">, j# {/ [+ \7 i; B</font><br>
<font size="4">有两个地方虽农兄再酌：</font><br>
<span style="display:none">4 `4 ]/ V. S7 d&amp; F&nbsp;&nbsp;x. A$ s</span><font size="4">1、“闲”字出韵，可能农兄大意了。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">+ f: {+ K6 m" X; d) c1 }8 d0 a</span><font size="4">2、“更”字再新韵中为平，出律，农兄是第二</font><br>
<span style="display:none">( x&amp; d, E% f" k&amp; [6 _7 u) l8 T+ b</span><font size="4">次将“更”在新韵中作仄声用了哦。“更”在古</font><font class="jammer">; [$ M. ^! v/ y3 ~2 k</font><br>
<font size="4"><font color="#ffffff"><font color="#444444">声中作仄声用。所以，古四声，今四声不能混用。</font> </font></font><font class="jammer">3 }! }0 F( W- {&amp; `8 O&amp; V</font><br>
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好湿。好湿。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:victory::victory:厉害！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2012-2-10 17:01</font> <img id="aimg_rb88X" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">4 e* K4 d&nbsp;&nbsp;F1 W" |, v2 n</font><br>
姚冶风光入眼来，兵戈铁马尽悠闲。v2 q<br>
<span style="display:none">3 g, ?6 J7 k* `5 g&amp; m! h</span>岩边林内皆福地，豹走狼行视美差。<br>
<span style="display:none">: I$ h5 Y4 R7 A5 m, H" V</span>随意荒山常自在，遇艰野径更开 ...</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">8 [&amp; m4 |7 d% l2 z" a2 F</span>确实是大意了，惭愧．更　有两读，也可读仄声，新韵两读的如何处理？</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2012-2-11 10:39</font> <img id="aimg_f3865" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">" q+ ?: P5 \7 r) Y3 _1 Y# W0 N0 ?</span>确实是大意了，惭愧．更　有两读，也可读仄声，新韵两读的如何处理？</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">( e7 w( h5 o! E9 X0 b5 n* N</span>农兄每次用韵（即押韵用的字）均是中华新韵的分类方式在用，所以诗中的其他的字就只能以新韵来看了。<br>
<span style="display:none">: e* O8 q* _7 i, K3 N* n8 C# C8 _</span>“更”在古声中是仄声，而在新韵中是平声。所以不能混用，“更”在“半夜三更”中也是平声。供参考。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2012-2-11 10:54</font> <img id="aimg_A5Wzc" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">2 k, W* o* w6 ~- Z; `</span>农兄每次用韵（即押韵用的字）均是中华新韵的分类方式在用，所以诗中的其他的字就只能以新韵来看了。<font class="jammer">8 Q' Z) Y1 r2 k1 G# K" t</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">. ?6 [0 {3 {- T8 c$ t</span>更　在表示程度加深的意思时是仄声的，有两读的字我都不怎么敢用，除非是找不到更好的字，<font class="jammer">1 V1 @: W7 d, T8 k</font><br>
兵戈铁马尽悠闲　这句帮我看哈应如何改才好</td></tr></tbody></table>


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