七律 春寒料峭异往常

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 都市外乡人 于 2012-3-1 10:31 编辑 </i><br>
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<div align="left">按时令，目前当一入春，但是仍然没感到有春的气息，寒霜、冷风、夜雨、低温挥之不去。搞得人都被这鬼天气搞的心烦意乱的。<br>
<span style="display:none">9 J) X9 V/ b% [' f/ t3 [</span><font size="6">惊魂午夜雷声响<font class="jammer">% B/ M7 Y" O3 O! o" E7 u8 c</font><br>
晓日藏身畏劲霜<font class="jammer">9 J, S- v: ]8 X7 @, G) Z7 o: \</font><br>
苦雨凄风凉兴致<font class="jammer">! q+ j7 U* a" u3 N5 m/ n</font><br>
愁云惨雾暗春光<font class="jammer">5 ^9 ^&nbsp;&nbsp;W- Q# q2 j</font><br>
千山萧瑟无生气<br>
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<span style="display:none">' z. R0 P. p1 p$ ]9 E</span>严冬早随三九去<font class="jammer">: m# t! L7 K8 B3 @( A" _&amp; M</font><br>
春寒料峭异平常</font></div></td></tr></tbody></table>


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秀山出人才了</td></tr></tbody></table>


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呵，异往常，晚上冷得执不住。估计今年春有点长，润四月呢。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:victory:{:soso_e181:}</td></tr></tbody></table>


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眼观楼主诗&nbsp;&nbsp;倍感周身寒</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2012-2-29 23:38 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">6 m7 i# d2 e$ d( I4 g</font><br>
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