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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2012-8-30 15:47 编辑 </i><br>
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<div align="left"><font color="sienna">诗词联几首</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna"><font face="Times New Roman">1</font>、十六字令（无痕回帖真诗人，以十六字令回之）：</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">真，难了清贫独自呻，营柴米，债主上门频。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">诗，抛却湖光空酒卮，寻花语，归去已成痴。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">人，未得工钱乞比邻，同妻话，有米不言贫。</font></div><font color="#333333"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="Times New Roman"><div align="left"><font size="4"><font color="sienna"><font face="Times New Roman">2</font>、五绝三首：</font></font></div><div align="left"><font size="4"><font color="sienna">谁解相思味，米醪加水兑。曾寻暗里香，和雪梅边睡。</font></font></div><div align="left"><font size="4"><font color="sienna">谁解相思味，红笺如玉贵。西楼眺白云，乌鹊归飞未？</font></font></div><font face="Times New Roman"><div align="left"><font size="4"><font color="sienna">孔方兜里少，有酒即登楼。往事何追忆，临风眺舞鸥。</font></font></div></font></font></font></font><div align="left"><font color="#333333"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="Times New Roman"><font face="Times New Roman"><font color="sienna">3、七绝</font></font></font></font></font><font style="font-size:14pt"></font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">苍狗宇中吞月月，白云弦上过家家。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">沉香有幸除陈迹，淡绿无痕品老茶。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna"><font face="Times New Roman">4</font>、对联（步韵无痕）</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">轻拈岭上花，餐露饮流霞，功名落下，醉生梦死依然耍；</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">漫扣营中马，卸鞍思遁甲，社稷倾斜，割地分天照样夸。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">无痕君原玉联（人禽之界）：</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">年年海上花，枪口绽云霞，残阳落下，和谐照样天天耍；</font><font class="jammer">" F- O1 h5 m' I! _: \! L5 q1 ?9 e</font><br>
<font color="sienna">日日槽中马，炕头铺铁甲，玉柱倾斜，媚俗依然对对夸。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna"><font face="Times New Roman">5</font>、应联：</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">对上：缥缈岫云，春风每把桃魂引；（潜龙）</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">出下：凄迷烟雨，秋月频将柳影牵。（半仙诗人）</font></div><br>
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<div align="left"><font color="sienna">真，难了清贫独自呻，营柴米，债主上门频。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">诗，抛却湖光空酒卮，寻花语，归去已成痴。</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">人，未得工钱乞比邻，同妻话，有米不言贫。</font></div><font class="jammer">: B, x* u" ~9 x3 N) Q</font><br>
<div align="left"><font color="sienna">好词！弟次韵之！</font></div><br>
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诗，鱼贯庭花换酒卮，寻风月，王道入迷痴。<br>
<span style="display:none">, \0 J! ^! V' ]</span>人，无愧青山作比邻，抛刀笔，君子不嫌贫。<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2012-8-31 12:48</font> <img id="aimg_CKHC1" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">0 N; X% c! c( ?7 K* Q</span>真，难了清贫独自呻，营柴米，债主上门频。诗，抛却湖光空酒卮，寻花语，归去已成痴。人，未得工钱乞比邻， ...</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">&nbsp;&nbsp;L8 J" U" N) m2 u</font><br>
谢雅和，敬茶哦！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">yantang 发表于 2012-8-30 15:56</font> <img id="aimg_zi6rU" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><font class="jammer">/ _8 ?" f9 w3 |5 U&nbsp;&nbsp;U* ?</font><br>
谢谢赏读，问好！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div align="left"><font color="sienna">对上：缥缈岫云，春风每把桃魂引；（潜龙）</font></div><div align="left"><font color="sienna">出下：凄迷烟雨，秋月频将柳影牵。（半仙诗人）</font></div><br>
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<span style="display:none">/ _! s6 @! A+ i' L5 {1 G</span>出句雅，对句妙，然对句跳跃些些，<font color="#ff00ff">烟雨</font>与<font color="#ff00ff">秋月</font>同在虽然悖驳常态，却不是没有的现象，但是一个<font color="#ff00ff">频</font>字就有得研究了，也就是此君经常在烟雨秋月中寻花问柳了，诗意却有悖常理！偶也来个：<font class="jammer">3 O1 q' F1 P$ g% n' H" G: \</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">4 A. Q6 `" B0 _9 V</span>朦胧烟月，夏荷频将玉露盈&nbsp; &nbsp; <br>
<span style="display:none">% ~5 p; A0 W. I9 ^2 w# ^</span>朦胧烟水，夏月常随柳黛飘&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<font color="#ff00ff">夏月</font>更比<font color="#ff00ff">秋月</font>贴，夏月夜湖光山色间湿地气温多云蒸水涵，故烟水一词熨帖，秋月之清浅静洁少争了几许凄迷。&nbsp; &nbsp;完全个个拙见，仅供参选！<br>
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也许诗意尚不敌“<font color="#a0522d">秋月频将柳影牵”。如果&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><font color="#a0522d">半仙诗人对句改一字就完美了：</font><font color="#a0522d">凄迷烟</font><font color="#ff00ff">水</font><font color="#a0522d">，秋月频将柳影牵。</font><br>
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