梨花（原创七律）

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梨花（原创七律）<br>
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满枝素装报春归，<br>
玉蕊凝寒映雪晖。<br>
蜂蝶嬉闹非探雪，<br>
竹梅搔首似寻妃。<br>
三番细雨繁花瘦，<br>
一缕朝阳嫩果肥。<br>
待到儿孙离别后，<br>
枯黄落叶进柴扉。<br>
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蜂蝶嬉闹非探雪，“闹”字出律了，可酌。问好！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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谢谢点评！“闹”可平可仄。当否？请予斧正！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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