六律 潜龙学诗 和无痕六律诗

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<font size="5">和无痕六律诗一首</font><br>
<span style="display:none">! b2 Y8 a5 q" ?8 M+ N</span><font size="5">六律　潜龙学诗<br>
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<span style="display:none">( B) I&amp; h' @4 {) ?</span>宿醉凭栏荡舟，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">/ m( b3 ^7 @( d* R) ^</span><font size="5">村郊踏月寻幽。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">9 h; ^! x, o1 }+ D&amp; S2 O</span><font size="5">心狂驰骋天下，</font><font class="jammer">' ^! U8 ~4 v; J) ^# c; I</font><br>
<font size="5">意念逍遥九州。</font><font class="jammer">( P2 V% b' P2 d' t$ h, V7 U2 }/ E. b% A' S</font><br>
<font size="5">借笔不分律韵，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">% w- o7 d&amp; L&amp; P" l7 y' X3 S( F) r</span><font size="5">求词乱点春秋。</font><font class="jammer">2 q* A7 _# S/ p</font><br>
<font size="5">无才未必愁叹，</font><br>
<span style="display:none">8 ?4 w8 j, F&amp; t8 Z* H! N2 R</span><font size="5">亦入词场戏游。</font><br>
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一阕宫商黄鹤楼，故人抛泪几重秋。<font class="jammer">+ [1 p/ l0 b9 t</font><br>
南飞雁北坪林坞，归去来兮鹦鹉洲。<br>
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登萍渡水双鱼晚，日暮不羁今古愁。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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仄仄平平仄平(韵)，平平仄仄平平(韵)。<br>
<span style="display:none">: T/ D; K) ?/ Y</span>平平仄仄平仄，仄仄平平仄平(韵)。(对仗)<br>
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此格就是，好，很好，六言律诗初笔就写到此等境界，十分难得，赞一个！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<font size="5">谢赞了。</font><font class="jammer">" m) H( q! X, k2 `5 ^&amp; _. A</font><br>
<font size="5">学而不知耻问，则始有进益矣。虽苦亦乐。</font><font class="jammer">$ F1 F, Y' K7 E3 r&amp; D/ A$ G; ?1 Y</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-9-30 15:50</font> <img id="aimg_ewZn9" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">/ J8 C9 r# H% s&nbsp;&nbsp;`, ^&amp; F) T</span>谢赞了。<font class="jammer">! T5 J. f3 a0 N* M" p. P5 V5 F3 r</font><br>
学而不知耻问，则始有进益矣。虽苦亦乐。</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none"># F: z0 n8 M' D% ~0 U</span>假以时日，兄定能写好格律诗词！弟翘首以盼！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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