《五言.咏秀山》求末句

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秀山掩峻岭,<font class="jammer">. Y9 }2 L& q4 X/ z! [( c: S</font><br>
妙泉汇清溪.<br>
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?????<font class="jammer">8 b/ }% X. J: y3 f</font><br>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由都市外乡人于 2011-11-19 16:58 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">2 t+ R+ u# Z7 e: h, s5 q0 U</span>“溶溪渡蓝桥",献丑了！</td></tr></tbody></table>

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由第九号当铺于 2011-11-19 18:00 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">; u" \2 Q* Y5 a3 v6 l. x</span>海洋荡官舟;P有点虚漂漂的哈。</td></tr></tbody></table>

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后面的接起！</td></tr></tbody></table>

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秀山掩峻岭,<br>
<span style="display:none">9 A3 ?: R; R+ U" g9 S</span>妙泉汇清溪；<br>
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书院迎鸿（洪）安。</td></tr></tbody></table>

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秀山掩峻岭,<br>
<span style="display:none">7 V  W$ P* D0 `% n* M; b</span>妙泉汇清溪；<font class="jammer">( I. {( U- I; k! i7 O. K</font><br>
钟灵毓龙凤,<font class="jammer">5 G" t* H; h: M9 @; D</font><br>
书院迎鸿（洪）安。<br>
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前两句写景，后两句喻人。“书院”愿指凤鸣书院（现民族中学），这里泛指学校。</td></tr></tbody></table>

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这个我不会:lol:lol:lol</td></tr></tbody></table>

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不会,哪个帮峨溶的写起看看</td></tr></tbody></table>

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由勤农于 2011-11-20 11:39 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">% e* B: D; J/ P0 y# v</font><br>
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以“秀山”县开头,“峻岭”“妙泉”“清溪”“钟灵”“龙凤”都是以前秀山县的乡镇名,“钟灵”作为地名是名词,但它的本意却是形容词,“龙凤”是名词并列词组,所以末句可以用“美翠”对“钟灵”,“龙凤”可以对“海洋”,但句意有点牵强.</td></tr></tbody></table>

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哎，我不是秀山人，不知道有什么讲究，不敢冒昧，接不上。<font class="jammer">- t8 z; N( V) b8 S+ j</font><br>
但从诗的格律看来，有点不太合律哦{:soso_e100:}</td></tr></tbody></table>

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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">逍遥舸发表于 2011-11-21 00:26</font> <img id="aimg_PmsFi" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">4 i! r. _6 F3 J: a4 ^5 e</font><br>
哎，我不是秀山人，不知道有什么讲究，不敢冒昧，接不上。<br>
<span style="display:none">* [; b# g2 V; L+ t2 K6 k. @</span>但从诗的格律看来，有点不太合律哦{:soso_e100: ...</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">, F3 m( b0 z! s" b) f</span>我只是在学诗,格律诗要求太严,还作不来,甚至连古风都还不太象.</td></tr></tbody></table>

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我也不会。只会扯草草揍笆篓，豆拢了作数。</td></tr></tbody></table>

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