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:victory::victory:拜读了，恳请将写诗应注意的平仄赐教一二！谢！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">都市外乡人 发表于 2011-12-2 13:37</font> <img id="aimg_URur3" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">0 N* ?; I# C8 J+ @( P* _</span><div align="center"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">岭上横云老树丫，风骚斜出拽青霞。</font></font></div><div align="center"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">闲情锁虎吞山月，惬意盘龙吐雪茄。</font></font></div><div align="center"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">佐古证今门外汉，攀岩挂壁涧边花。</font></font></div><div align="center"><font style="font-size:14pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">为何科读伤心透？老姐从来不许他。</font></font></div><font class="jammer">, C" }1 x3 D* R+ {9 Y @</font><br>
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就我这首诗来说一下吧，此律仄声起，其格律如下：<br>
<span style="display:none">; N; {: _" N# X5 S' b6 n8 R! d</span>中仄中平中仄平，中平中仄仄平平。<br>
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中仄中平平仄仄，中平中仄仄平平。<font class="jammer">; U$ l1 E. h3 W$ S</font><br>
中平中仄平平仄，中仄中平中仄平。<font class="jammer">. v2 s, [) p0 ~( L/ R" e& y</font><br>
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一三五为中，意指可平可仄，但是不能犯孤，还有各种变化，一时间说不完，说多了你不易融汇贯通，以后遇到问题再讲就容易记忆了。<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-12-2 14:06</font> <img id="aimg_jf8pl" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-2 14:08</font> <img id="aimg_o6sO6" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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哈哈哈，好得很你下班打我电话就是，就是感冒了也要赔你勾两杯。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-2 14:08</font> <img id="aimg_e8j8l" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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嫂子一起撒！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">都市外乡人 发表于 2011-12-2 13:37</font> <img id="aimg_jIEXm" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-12-2 15:38</font> <img id="aimg_kHdIX" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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