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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-12-8 11:57 编辑 </i><br>
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<font size="3"><font color="#800080"> 七律 相知可煮酒(新韵)<br>
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<span style="display:none">& X# B. i% v- i' j2 x7 D8 Z</span>庭前煮酒论英雄，</font><font color="purple">漫品新茶赏玉弓。</font><font class="jammer">' o& b" _8 d/ I1 C) M. M</font><br>
<font color="purple">溪水说吾心绪好，</font><font color="purple">山云谓我意惊疯。</font><font class="jammer">- U. `1 _2 I) f3 }0 }8 I* C</font><br>
<font color="purple">从来世态多奇事，</font><font color="purple">自古人间少大公。</font><font class="jammer">. b: d* E1 V' D9 d4 z</font><br>
<font color="purple">不屑亭中长叹客，</font><font color="purple">临风旧榭话情衷。</font></font><font class="jammer">/ p8 A, C. u: [& I {</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">5 }. p- r/ v! I/ O8 E</span><font size="3"><font color="darkgreen">人前切莫说枭雄，吊脚楼头夜引弓。</font></font><font class="jammer">5 z0 ^" V1 ?( `# W8 f& k</font><br>
<font size="3"><font color="darkgreen">憔悴添杯麻到死，轻狂掬月老来疯。<font class="jammer">$ E3 B8 W' w6 h( @</font><br>
刺槐幽默常无意，背古谦虚最不公。</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">- f& W3 \8 T& e* A& X) i+ P7 H; B</span><font size="3"><font color="darkgreen">恨我才疏刀笔钝，绝情残剑自由衷。</font></font><font class="jammer">. Z; v p0 k- A r( s</font><br>
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<font size="3"><font color="darkgreen">附七绝一首</font></font><font class="jammer">0 D" K( ^0 X/ D+ i Y6 f! ?</font><br>
<font color="darkgreen"><font color="#800080"><font size="3"> 七绝 四季如春<br>
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<span style="display:none">+ x W1 e* r+ a I! d. o- ?* q</span><font color="darkgreen"><font size="3"><font color="#800080">繁星皓月照诸仙，</font><font color="purple">起舞翩跹奏琴弦。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">( W% `0 C+ F8 g+ F: ~1 [! K6 g7 M</span><font color="purple">众荐你来为大帝，</font><font color="purple">一年四季尽春天。</font><font class="jammer">6 b$ a9 H; \: R. U</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">+ Z/ S* t- b. \; J$ M, c( L* ?</span><font color="darkgreen"><font size="3">附<font color="darkgreen">勤农诗原玉:</font></font><br>
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倘若命我掌时令，定叫春冬照轮回。<font class="jammer">- J) N3 f& o2 W# u6 S! J# Y, L</font><br>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2011-12-8 17:16 编辑 </i><font class="jammer"># R0 j8 p4 B( T( T6 r9 ]/ N</font><br>
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煮酒甭论英雄，<br>
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<span style="display:none">2 }8 I. c; P: Z% ^, \6 m& i6 c' Z</span>两盏三杯入喉，<font class="jammer">& D0 ~9 B% {7 c</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">勤农 发表于 2011-12-8 14:30</font> <img id="aimg_gzf1E" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">6 H9 b: Z$ _$ {6 i/ Y</span>豪情自存腹中。<br>
<span style="display:none">6 T8 s C8 E9 X, \. _</span>三杯两盏入肚，</blockquote></div><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">秀山西街 发表于 2011-12-8 15:16</font> <img id="aimg_pt7e7" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">& o! D8 w" e8 X& R2 X</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-12-8 15:09</font> <img id="aimg_jsO41" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">& P' g( W. Z% ?8 Z6 l</font><br>
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韵律这方面的知识我一哈记不住浪个多，有简单的记法没得？</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-12-8 15:21</font> <img id="aimg_X34vV" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
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