五律 庸官

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 都市外乡人 于 2011-12-17 16:33 编辑 </i><br>
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当下官场，个别庸官利用人民所赋之权力，不思为国为民，大行贪腐之道，败坏社会风气，辱没党纪国法，人人愤恨。更有甚者，无视和纵容身边人仗势横行，“坑爹拼爹”。今作拙律一首，以示谴责。未敢以偏概全，定有不妥之处，恳请斧正！<br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; r% K+ N- w7 B) }</span>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; <font size="5">昏庸“父母官”，重任卸双肩。<br>
<span style="display:none">$ _6 ?' @* v: x7 I/ s0 e</span>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; 未念责与利，专贪贿色权。<font class="jammer"># K' x8 L5 P7 Q" L</font><br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; 资源独享占，雷语话连篇。<font class="jammer">. t6 K&amp; ]) l$ |+ N</font><br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; 惯养身边子，骄奢不等闲。<font class="jammer">- j( P. J% y3 F8 m# I</font><br>
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把正题的字弄大一点散</td></tr></tbody></table>


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支持下</td></tr></tbody></table>


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总体感觉是一首好诗，但白壁微暇，不吐不快，楼主多包涵。<br>
<span style="display:none">$ A! `&nbsp;&nbsp;l0 J&amp; j% p; O$ @" u' s4 b: z. p</span>既为五律，二三联应为对偶句为好，<font class="jammer">( q. l5 n7 C+ i+ ~9 p* ~/ w4 j</font><br>
第二联中“未念责与利”似有出律。<font class="jammer">. ~# [&nbsp;&nbsp;}7 z/ X# L8 h" R1 _) r; Y, @$ \</font><br>
我也初学，不知对否，待方家点评。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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