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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 勤农 于 2012-1-10 11:15 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">4 W# ^' P5 @ i/ E7 y' \8 N( X</font><br>
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<font size="5">伟岸如山岳，</font><font class="jammer">% V; H# z+ U8 q* i9 e% b* }</font><br>
<font size="5">胸怀似海洋。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">0 L4 l$ m! O) Y U$ f% A0 {, |</span><font size="5">帮人常以乐，</font><font class="jammer"> F5 F v6 L; v) S</font><br>
<font size="5">救难偶为香。</font><font class="jammer">. e0 @; h$ R" u6 x; J</font><br>
<font size="5">教子稀言语，</font><font class="jammer">1 g' v6 ~& O: t# u/ E</font><br>
<font size="5">尊亲重古章。</font><br>
<span style="display:none">; {4 F; l6 z$ I* V+ Y</span><font size="5">平生皆苦累，</font><br>
<span style="display:none"> |0 L8 I+ [$ o3 z$ J8 \6 U</span><font size="5">到老亦耕忙。</font><font class="jammer">+ F: \' Z# q2 u/ Q$ Y* A</font><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">原来的我 发表于 2012-1-9 14:33</font> <img id="aimg_qp7Aa" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">. @8 i! c) _) A2 Y5 N/ T: Y</span>多谢！预祝新年快乐！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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到老还耕忙。<br>
<span style="display:none">3 ~/ {" v/ D4 d5 Q1 `6 O</span>“还”出律，“还”处应仄，用“亦”可。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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不错，真不错，平凡的身影，伟大的人格，有这样的父亲，兄之幸也。<font class="jammer">! m( X, e( T7 d4 K8 s% k3 C</font><br>
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潜龙兄说的有理，不过，别听他的，我的看法：亦字没有悦字好，嘿嘿，不知兄意如何？<font class="jammer">7 | j5 n$ U+ e* p, C* i0 Z# `$ S</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">: s: ?& \% S& Q6 N& k</span>尾联，弟还有一议，可否改为：平生虽苦累，晚照耀山乡。<br>
<span style="display:none">% L' y: ?4 h- r3 k</span>我的意思，与前面父亲的伟大作一总结{:soso_e100:}，如有不妥，望兄见谅，弟多饮了两杯。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">逍遥舸 发表于 2012-1-9 22:59</font> <img id="aimg_VEFSn" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">3 ]. ?* T; l P- I. O</span>不错，真不错，平凡的身影，伟大的人格，有这样的父亲，兄之幸也。<font class="jammer">$ e6 B0 h" K# U& A2 i( h/ u2 U</font><br>
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我只是论其格律，无他意。呵呵。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2012-1-9 21:20</font> <img id="aimg_EQbhP" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">* }1 ~2 \# T! b( X! ^' M</font><br>
到老还耕忙。<font class="jammer"> S* F* Z8 J! P4 v! P! _ j</font><br>
“还”出律，“还”处应仄，用“亦”可。</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">( G* `) ]- t6 h# d6 i( u* L8 w0 v2 n</span>是我把还字的声调弄错了，多谢指正</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">逍遥舸 发表于 2012-1-9 22:59</font> <img id="aimg_aw900" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">! n% m5 c, A& m3 i8 y</span>不错，真不错，平凡的身影，伟大的人格，有这样的父亲，兄之幸也。<br>
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我觉得还是亦字好，毕竟到老还做农活对农民来说也是一种无奈。晚照耀山乡，有点过于伟大了，不适合用来形容我的父亲。<br>
<span style="display:none">9 }' s( x& d) E! W2 t7 ^1 c</span>多谢兄弟了！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">Ann_. 发表于 2012-1-10 04:02</font> <img id="aimg_Pb11k" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">; y8 j/ \3 ^5 U& `( v</span>多谢！预祝新年快乐！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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