写了首小诗打发时间，请指教

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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 伯爵之殇 于 2009-9-25 23:19 编辑 </i><br>
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写了首小诗。打发时间。请指教 <br>
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&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; 青春点色<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;目光的余角扫过你洁净的脸颊<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;就这样毫无戒备被你闯入心扉<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;桂花的清香牵着我们的手漫步<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;拉紧的手来为这永恒的依恋买单<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;一g芬芳的泥土埋下青春的印记<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;你那醉酒的脸颊&nbsp;&nbsp;为这黯淡的秋色点彩<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;一点、两点、三点、、、、<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;如碰撞般被打翻的色盘<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;那幸福的红晕洒满心间<br>
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没读懂</td></tr></tbody></table>


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不多心楼主,我觉得不怎样.</td></tr></tbody></table>


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楼主，好兴致</td></tr></tbody></table>


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楼上的签名不错，不错！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote>楼上的签名不错，不错！<br>
<font size="2"><font color="#999999">糊狸 发表于 2009-9-27 10:40</font> <img id="aimg_Jer60" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" src="https://www.cqxszx.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
:loveliness: :handshake</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<font color="DarkOrange">伯爵之伤，无人能懂.</font></td></tr></tbody></table>


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3# <i>叫蛐子</i>  <br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;怎么会多心呢。多多指教。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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