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发表于 2019-4-7 16:07:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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<font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:22pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;时&nbsp;&nbsp;流</font></font><font style="font-size:22pt"></font></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">: h6 p( B2 _/ s; `$ {6 ]' ]. s: b</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我知道</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><font class="jammer">1 R3 e. _2 i) b5 |3 J, W' e</font><br>
<font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;你会悄悄离去</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">: B2 i2 w' O% E; J. c0 @</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;你不会和我告别</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">7 \0 [" A! @6 [# K3 K) _</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;你知道</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">, s5 @&nbsp;&nbsp;Q# L. M</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我不会为你流泪</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none"># |9 Q" I0 Y7 k7 A! }+ r* }! q+ A* d</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我们只是熟悉</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><font class="jammer">% r6 x4 N- O8 v" `6 h</font><br>
<font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我不曾爱过你</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">) F% t9 L7 h9 E- u% ]</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我已经够疲惫</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">' i5 I9 Y) @' g% D' K&nbsp;&nbsp;r( ?</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我且沉沉睡去</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; t&nbsp;&nbsp;K! H# c8 y7 w&amp; T/ g; r</span><font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;让这些过错完美无缺</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><font class="jammer">- Y: }5 k, E9 m: b8 g</font><br>
<font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;让其它的在心中都褪了颜色</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><font class="jammer">$ ~2 r2 P&amp; U/ y, m1 Q" d</font><br>
<font color="#000000"><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我再把这事清晰地忆起</font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">; l% u3 b&amp; r# s/ |) ^; w</span><font face="宋体"><font style="font-size:18pt"><font color="#000000">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;那时,再来好好哭泣</font></font></font><font style="font-size:18pt"></font></td></tr></tbody></table>


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我再把这事清晰地忆起<br>
<span style="display:none">. p" M6 x$ }% x, m&amp; o/ y6 N</span>那时,再来好好哭泣</td></tr></tbody></table>


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我不曾爱过你<font class="jammer">4 K: u. M8 u&nbsp;&nbsp;m; F</font><br>
4 K/ H# ?2 I! Q; a&amp; i$ r&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我已经够疲惫9 l" T* o&nbsp;&nbsp;v% C4 Q: i/ d% @<font class="jammer">* }/ S/ c" S- H' g' |$ \</font><br>
&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我且沉沉睡去4 c, b! K# c3 s; e<br>
<span style="display:none">; ~. v# q3 K0 c# Y0 L0 x; `0 e</span>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;让这些过错完美无缺! b1 C/ l! u/ i&amp; c7 l2 X<br>
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&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;那时,再来好好哭泣</td></tr></tbody></table>


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殇</td></tr></tbody></table>


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一个矛盾的载体</td></tr></tbody></table>


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“我不曾爱过你”假打,自欺欺人:lol</td></tr></tbody></table>


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现在的年青人都很直白,很难有古人哪种意景了,象楼主这样的诗人很难得,可能没读懂此诗所表达的意思,但还是觉得标题过于拗口</td></tr></tbody></table>


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其实题目也可以换成“似水年华”,诗的语言不同于其它文体的语言,经常“正话反说,反话正说”,用你的话说就是“假打”。<font class="jammer">* \8 c# c+ u&amp; z0 q</font><br>
每位读者由于年龄、性别、性格、学识、经历、信仰等的不同,对同一首诗有不同或者截然相反的理解,这完全正常。<font class="jammer">( ]- u+ R$ I+ F) c) E</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">- n' O! K&nbsp;&nbsp;}9 W8 q- B8 G! S</span>其实题目也可以换成“似水年华”,诗的语言不同于其它文体的语言,经常“正话反说,反话正说”,用你的话说就是“假打”。<br>
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