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准确的说你是在描述故事，抒发感情<br>
<span style="display:none">% U# F( V3 i9 x: B( P</span> 根本就没诗的韵味，写的太朴实平淡了</td></tr></tbody></table>
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尊重他人，就是尊重自己</td></tr></tbody></table>
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我比较直接<br>
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哦，LZ的大作整来欣赏盘要得不？</td></tr></tbody></table>
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将你的大作弄出来看哈萨！</td></tr></tbody></table>
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不“杂滴”？还是不“咋地”？</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote>尊重他人，就是尊重自己<br>
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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 狂野风 于 2009-7-18 10:32 编辑 </i><br>
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诗这个东西太说不准了.舒婷的<祖国啊,我亲爱的祖国>投了几次稿找了几家杂志都没编辑喜欢.但现在确成了众多演讲辞的主调,琅琅上口.诗的好与不好只是个人的口味不同罢了.<font class="jammer">0 b4 t3 Z U+ H# j4 g9 O2 h</font><br>
但文学是在争鸣中成长的,楼主这么有胆识的提出某些观点,难能可贵.但我们可以说某首诗好在什么地方不好在什么地方,或是空洞或是平淡,抑或是自已不喜欢等等.最好不要说不“杂滴”，这样就不“杂滴”好了。<br>
<span style="display:none">- Z" ?/ B! I1 _7 \! P! [# \2 X</span>作为被批评者,我们都要谦虚的接受,认真反思.他们也许对我们提高文学素养有帮助.<font class="jammer">* k# r: q4 G8 x9 I* [2 w2 [+ @9 B</font><br>
文学需要争鸣,社区需要和谐.</td></tr></tbody></table>
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