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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 梨花开 于 2009-12-3 08:55 编辑 </i><br>
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<span style="display:none">( A7 n% V- o0 T2 H( f&amp; m) Q, u/ {</span>白天和黑夜的交替<br>
<span style="display:none">; J- F3 q0 Y4 r, K; U&amp; E, B3 X</span>擦不去落寞的心<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;b4 o; S, P0 b, f6 Q</span>迷失的灵魂在孤寂和失意中静静地寻找着最后的出路<br>
<span style="display:none">! X2 `&amp; y&nbsp;&nbsp;x; O8 _&amp; B</span>梦中醉，醉中梦<br>
<span style="display:none">/ \' _9 j2 ^" H7 ]4 |/ r( v, t</span>似乎回到久远的昨天<br>
<span style="display:none">" C&amp; w' x* `4 O6 L( H" r</span>真实得让人不敢触摸<font class="jammer">1 _3 E&nbsp;&nbsp;`* n8 ]</font><br>
秋冬的夜<br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; P5 A. P* E- r</span>携着一片冰凉<font class="jammer">, L; k, M" J% f4 p. ~+ K</font><br>
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匆匆的光阴的脚步<br>
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才是我心痛的痕迹<font class="jammer">3 e' h' T- r) @0 f: Z&amp; k&amp; ]</font><br>
似乎诺言也被时间的脚步冲到海洋深处<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;J" I1 c, |3 _+ _- }( `* U8 w</span>被礁石悄悄藏匿<font class="jammer">0 D8 o+ G; x. E0 d+ u% H</font><br>
寻寻觅觅<br>
<span style="display:none">' `9 A&nbsp;&nbsp;L&amp; [# r' S+ y, U) F- J</span>不见来时的风景<br>
<span style="display:none">% j' a) b7 y6 u% u, I- _&nbsp;&nbsp;x! Z% l</span>只有流泪的贝壳，躺在搁浅的海滩哭泣......</td></tr></tbody></table>


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楼主还可以将意境写得更深一些，词汇用得更精准一些会很好的！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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这个让我想起来一个连续剧《迷失》一样！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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只有流泪的贝壳，躺在搁浅的海滩哭泣...... <br>
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留下的<br>
<span style="display:none">' R) |: V% @* f&nbsp;&nbsp;m</span>仍旧是苦涩</td></tr></tbody></table>


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更喜欢后一小节，“迷失”得让人心痛<br>
<span style="display:none">9 F/ d9 ~; G" I2 {</span>这些句子对于陌生的网络读者来说，是一种绝美的享受</td></tr></tbody></table>


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谢谢各位！让大家见笑了！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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知晓迷失，实际上是更有方向。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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秋冬的夜<br>
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<span style="display:none">/ t&amp; H5 A" z: A" {2 N</span>文字里透析着寒颤。、、、让其冰凉迷失在我的领域吧。。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 梨花开 于 2009-12-5 22:48 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">5 c. j+ c1 M- }4 h0 z7 ^</font><br>
<div class="quote"><blockquote>楼主还可以将意境写得更深一些，词汇用得更精准一些会很好的！<br>
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&nbsp; &nbsp; 谢谢指点！我会努力！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:call:</td></tr></tbody></table>


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再次欣赏</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote>遇到内行了吧<font class="jammer">8 ?/ }+ t2 I( q</font><br>
<font size="2"><font color="#999999">老光 发表于 2009-12-6 01:10</font> <img id="aimg_dZK8K" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" src="https://www.cqxszx.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
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<span style="display:none">) e&nbsp;&nbsp;u9 {' s! d9 h</span>&nbsp; &nbsp; 是呀！我这个门外汉只是喜欢诗歌而已，在此胡乱涂鸦，朋友们值得我学习的地方太多太多了！</td></tr></tbody></table>


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语言很美，感觉身临其境</td></tr></tbody></table>


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