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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 潜龙 于 2011-11-5 22:00 编辑 </i><br>
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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">七绝（律）六首（新韵）</font></font><br>
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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">（<font face="仿宋">以下七绝、七律均与无痕君相和而得</font>）</font></font><font class="jammer">* Z' K" a( M7 q+ S8 J8 x9 R' c</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">! u( _. O) _' b* Q) r</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">七绝 其一<br>
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<span style="display:none">- U& \2 l0 `' M. n5 G</span>八百香秋寻旧梦，半枝腊笔写伊人。</font></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">! C/ O) N5 c3 w5 }9 q# T2 n</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">七绝 其二<font class="jammer">; a% R* g5 [. K. b; D; X</font><br>
唏嘘雨巷凉亭旧，逆转时空数百秋。</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">; s% K) v7 T- E- s u7 }9 k</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">河汉无边仍邂逅，敞怀一任驭飞舟。</font></font><font class="jammer">9 Q! J L) P9 q1 {</font><br>
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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">七绝 其三<font class="jammer">. N- a, Q1 k& w8 W</font><br>
伏无提拔终徒尔，飞不推开亦枉然。<font class="jammer">7 J- g7 b% J% U5 ^</font><br>
纵使飞鸿行万里，倦时还落小池边。<font class="jammer">+ A" { f' G( T h% s2 {; {! r9 l</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">% s5 j; b0 Y0 z& j9 c</span>七绝 其四<br>
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明月当空行万里，一双天眼照无边。<br>
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<span style="display:none">. d, k3 V2 q5 i6 o7 _</span>七绝 其五</font></font><font class="jammer">2 n/ O m3 a6 n$ A3 l5 y% \% t' g</font><br>
<font face="黑体"><font size="4">菊冷笛横花入梦，碑残桥去影行空。</font></font><br>
<span style="display:none">2 ]+ [* u: C1 f" C</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">可怜还是池边柳，无奈凭他吊脚风。</font></font><font class="jammer">$ s! o1 U* H+ W F- z, _</font><br>
<font face="黑体"><font size="4">(<font face="宋体">注:此绝后两句为无痕君续</font>)</font></font><font class="jammer"> u) B3 s7 o3 a+ T</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">3 L' A ~9 c0 Y! l$ j: G8 A; B) y</span><font size="4"><font face="黑体">七律 无题</font></font><font class="jammer">+ N$ |# n' H* V9 d, \, p</font><br>
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<font size="4"><font face="黑体">雨后飞星洒柳君，林边犟丑绕花裙。<br>
<span style="display:none">+ {6 ~6 b4 ]& e</span>三天未饮非精怪，一脑无心是秽闻。</font><font class="jammer">% S i+ Y' w% R' u</font><br>
<font face="黑体">宿醉难知身龌龊，吞烟不管雾氤氲。</font><font class="jammer">$ f' }* H* m* u6 j8 L</font><br>
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我喜欢无题</td></tr></tbody></table>
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请问师兄 仄 平 是不是指字的声调啊。？</td></tr></tbody></table>
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{:soso_e179:}不错。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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牛 出律。犟丑 （丑 牛的别名）</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2011-11-5 16:44</font> <img id="aimg_u5YI0" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
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<span style="display:none">. G3 R2 p# }( g* @- y6 H2 z5 i0 t9 U</span>谢谢指出来，这个字我是凭印象认为是个仄声字，所以出律了，还是不熟练。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">爱情的刹割？ 发表于 2011-11-5 13:24</font> <img id="aimg_RIIWw" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">. d/ W. }& ]6 Y5 X' w7 D' B& R' ?</font><br>
请问师兄 仄 平 是不是指字的声调啊。？</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">* j$ G3 s4 z2 A+ B" b- k</font><br>
是的，平仄就是以声调定的，一些规律你可以通过网络学习。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">潜龙 发表于 2011-11-5 22:28</font> <img id="aimg_VZ15A" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">* r' X5 Y; T9 H5 ~' a$ y3 V" A5 e</font><br>
是的，平仄就是以声调定的，一些规律你可以通过网络学习。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">9 i; B3 N! u Q</font><br>
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