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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 不小心 于 2011-11-8 19:28 编辑 </i><br>
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<font face="黑体"><font size="4">博古通今梦一场，哪知科读病秋忙。威风硬是凭权盾，宝气尤其赖印章。<font class="jammer">1 c&amp; R, E&nbsp;&nbsp;L# u1 Q</font><br>
公仆些儿千百胆，月薪差点两三方。看花啷个嘘嘘眼，咋好意思都认娘。</font></font><font class="jammer">" }4 O- z8 c. D! J. Y</font><br>
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<span style="display:none">) z* ^2 [, o5 s. B2 D, D; M</span><font face="黑体"><font size="4">注：方言入诗，我想更恰逢其时吧！</font></font><br>
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呵呵，小弟还不会律诗，见笑了。<font class="jammer">5 ?7 L# v1 k' G5 G</font><br>
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驻住狗屋都耍项，鼠光眼目自称王。<br>
<span style="display:none">: E5 `: ^' e4 g4 u( K: C0 j8 t</span>三秋过后坟山上，梦反黄泉见老娘。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">飞天浪仔 发表于 2011-11-8 20:12</font> <img id="aimg_zigGc" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font></blockquote></div><br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">爱情的刹割？ 发表于 2011-11-8 20:19</font> <img id="aimg_qbf8X" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">&amp; e&amp; M$ G8 v9 w&nbsp;&nbsp;N4 v- E</span>呵呵，小弟还不会律诗，见笑了。</blockquote></div><font class="jammer">/ i1 z$ V' N4 P: B! z. L0 C8 M</font><br>
我来把这绝句的格律翻译出来，然后你自行对照，细读、多品知分晓，而知能改！<br>
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<span style="display:none">; z+ S&amp; `+ r- i) X4 e&nbsp;&nbsp;q&amp; l0 q, V&amp; o4 x! X</span>驻住狗屋都耍项，鼠光眼目自称王。&nbsp;&nbsp;<font class="jammer">5 |! @0 U* m3 n; V' X+ R# u&nbsp;&nbsp;f</font><br>
古：仄仄仄仄平仄仄　仄平仄仄仄通通　 ◆王【下平七阳】【去声二十三漾】<br>
<span style="display:none">( B# X$ |&nbsp;&nbsp;v' K+ Y</span>今：仄仄仄平平仄仄　仄平仄仄仄通平　 ◆王【十唐】<br>
<span style="display:none">+ T$ U&amp; j. `# ^: d' v</span>&nbsp; &nbsp; 三秋过后坟山上，梦反黄泉见老娘。&nbsp;&nbsp;<br>
<span style="display:none">) c( ]$ b. G. o; c6 ^&nbsp;&nbsp;o$ K</span>古：通平通仄通平仄　通通平平仄仄平　 ◆娘【下平七阳】<font class="jammer">( C7 t! N6 S# n&amp; c' |7 F</font><br>
今：平平仄仄平平仄　仄仄平平仄仄平　 ◆娘【十唐】<font class="jammer">9 M6 F( ]* G! @' V&amp; n$ h</font><br>
按你这首绝句起手式其格律如下：<font class="jammer">: F3 ]. y- {; f&nbsp;&nbsp;a% X( k' g/ d; _</font><br>
仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平。<font class="jammer">9 {" F. S, {7 _! u6 H2 R; m</font><br>
平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平。<font class="jammer"># p6 N( B- H' |&nbsp;&nbsp;D</font><br>
注：绝句和律诗的平仄格律可以在不犯孤的基础上，随意改动一三五律步的平仄的。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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