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<i class="pstatus"> 本帖最后由 都市外乡人 于 2012-9-10 07:05 编辑 </i><font class="jammer">" m" G" r# g" d</font><br>
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在格律上再打磨一下就好了。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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确实，有好几处都出律了，建议楼主去找人学习一下格律诗的格律要求就OK了。</td></tr></tbody></table>
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