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发表于 2019-4-7 16:07:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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渝地东南伍见君,<br>
<span style="display:none">7 V7 s) }1 a&nbsp;&nbsp;}0 z9 H1 z7 ]6 G</span>误投尘世一精灵。<font class="jammer">( a3 ~7 a* ~3 b8 ~- l% I</font><br>
才如健骏驰荒野,<font class="jammer">) {. m$ X0 f3 `% ]+ r; h</font><br>
文似惊鸿驾彩云。<br>
<span style="display:none">/ W8 L; ^9 E: b% u/ O, L$ O</span>国事忧心追子美,<font class="jammer">' \: {5 n# w&nbsp;&nbsp;F3 }2 [# t</font><br>
民生挂念胜希文。<font class="jammer">8 Z&nbsp;&nbsp;w* V( O8 N2 e8 n</font><br>
神交已久谋相聚,<br>
<span style="display:none">' `$ Z0 y! k0 n/ C&nbsp;&nbsp;i&nbsp;&nbsp;S</span>畅饮千杯了我心。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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写得好,恭喜楼主有这样一个知己!</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:victory::victory::victory::victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>


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:victory::victory:</td></tr></tbody></table>


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哈哈啊,如果不是今晚我家小子一个在家,我一定请你到《武陵食源》饮一杯,改天如何?注意,韵脚失查!<br>
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奉帚拾荒如见君,<br>
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德馨宁愿居茅舍,<font style="color:rgb(255, 255, 255)"><font style="font-size:10px">+ A1 j6 I$ y4 n</font></font><br>
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象管难为张好古,<br>
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一缕馨香入雁群。<br>
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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2012-10-14 21:08</font> <img id="aimg_M7rkh" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">3 A0 q* ?&nbsp;&nbsp;W7 b8 E+ @" s, r</span>哈哈啊,如果不是今晚我家小子一个在家,我一定请你到《武陵食源》饮一杯,改天如何?注意,韵脚失查!<br>
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谢兄提醒,方发现灵、心出韵。一为大意,二实韵感不强,今后当慎之。此律染瑕,吾当日后另作之,望兄勿怪。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2012-10-14 21:08</font> <img id="aimg_S8cwc" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">9 _" d- ^: m&nbsp;&nbsp;v/ f' p% g</font><br>
哈哈啊,如果不是今晚我家小子一个在家,我一定请你到《武陵食源》饮一杯,改天如何?注意,韵脚失查!<font class="jammer">7 z1 P5 b. @) [9 z</font><br>
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经兄提醒,现作修改如下:<br>
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<span style="display:none">3 p# E. n- X3 p</span>渝地东南伍见君,<font class="jammer">! q; s8 f: `' \* c&amp; r3 b) H</font><br>
卓卓独立世超群<font class="jammer">0 K&nbsp;&nbsp;S1 q" q4 O</font><br>
才如健骏驰荒野,<br>
<span style="display:none">/ ?$ x. a9 `* e+ ?7 U! S</span>文似惊鸿驾彩云。<font class="jammer">2 f' l. G2 a" @. v7 _</font><br>
国事忧心追子美,<font class="jammer">2 e2 X* R4 ~2 g4 V</font><br>
民生挂念胜希文。<br>
<span style="display:none">&nbsp;&nbsp;o' |8 `" o6 E" {+ `( b. M</span>神交已久谋一聚,<font class="jammer">8 R. A: r# i' L2 a</font><br>
肺腑倾谈尽万樽。</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">逍遥舸 发表于 2012-10-16 10:29</font> <img id="aimg_oJVc2" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><font class="jammer">6 _9 O* N&amp; A% Q+ P4 T</font><br>
经兄提醒,现作修改如下:<br>
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<span style="display:none">2 Q* Y1 H2 R% }9 o! H. _7 F</span>如此美誉,我诚惶诚恐,愧领了!</td></tr></tbody></table>


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<div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><font color="#999999">不小心 发表于 2012-10-21 19:35</font> <img id="aimg_Cl3i0" onclick="zoom(this, this.src, 0, 0, 0)" class="zoom" file="static/image/common/back.gif" onmouseover="img_onmouseoverfunc(this)" lazyloadthumb="1" border="0" alt=""></font><br>
<span style="display:none">' \3 t. m0 T% D7 n</span>如此美誉,我诚惶诚恐,愧领了!</blockquote></div><br>
<span style="display:none">* o* [9 J8 h" \. i8 Y4 b7 f- j6 z</span>我现在登陆秀山在线时灵时不灵,如不嫌冒昧,望兄加Q&nbsp;&nbsp;9395321&nbsp;&nbsp;使吾能常聆弦音悟雅意,不亦快哉?</td></tr></tbody></table>


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