秀山卫生系统首届“太素杯”诗词新诗 获奖作品（12首）

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<div align="center"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="5"><font color="red"><font color="#c891">秀山</font>卫生系统首届“太素杯”诗词新诗</font></font></font></div><div align="center"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="5"><font color="red">获奖作品（12首）</font></font></font></div><br>
<div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font color="red"><font size="5">一等奖（2名</font>）</font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">1</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">洞仙歌・方歌饮</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font color="black">嫣然</font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">苑中红药，井边三千顷。白芷冬花蜜蜂引。武陵春、茅店香桂撩人，</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">鲜竹沥、伏暑驱邪解痉。&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;鸳鸯承雨露，毓秀钟灵，明月疏心梦</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">初醒。半夏逐寒痰，利水停风。和桔梗，肺宁脾省。夏枯草，清心亦</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">安神，筑台上，闲来又方歌饮。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">评：此词甚妙，尤为出彩。无论从谋篇断句遣词炼字，均无可挑剔。本词格律精准而声韵优雅，一也；</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">本文灵动而准确的嵌入诸多药名，且组成经方，在有限的空间把方药合理的安置其中，更无一晦涩之词、</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">生僻之字，尤为难得，二也；本词得文心之锦绣，偕医药之专攻，合为辞赋之雅韵，看似轻描淡写，实</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">则举重若轻，探得《绝妙好词》之境界，三也。命题作文，写到此处，蔚为观瞻！</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">2</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">七律・杏林天使</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="新宋体"><font color="black">邓文学</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">苍黎长念武陵春，紫燕红泥气象新。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">玉影翩跹锄杏雨，星眸婉转净心尘。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">清荷浅浅蛮腰瘦，雅韵悠悠大爱真。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">自信泉香风讯暖，一壶甘苦煮冰轮。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">评：本律值得细品，全文贯穿物语，手法高妙。起句即颇具气势，惹人青睐。颔联化用景语且暗藏典故，</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">颈联描写白衣天使不可方物的形象，在笔者心中我们的天使都是春天的使者。颈联，怡景怡情，相得益彰，</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">尤为出彩。多少岁月可流走，多少春梦可重来？问世间，谁不依恋美好的青春，而我们的白衣天使都依旧</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">风雨不改的守护着一方净土，送走了无数的</font><font color="#000000">月盈月缺，任青丝绾成了霜发。这些春去秋来的夜月，足以鉴</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">证了，一颗美丽的，晶莹剔透的心灵。本文之胜出，在于“不着一字而尽得风流”，一支细腻的笔，温婉的</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">抒写了白衣天使那崇高的理想，洁白的情愫。</font></font></font></div><br>
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<div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="5"><font color="red">二等奖（4名）</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">3</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">七律・杏林春暖<br>
</font></font><font color="black">陈关祥</font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">神州策马沐朝阳，橘井清风献秘方。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">一点灵心通素问，满怀仁术赞岐黄。<br>
银针济世千家乐，妙手回春满苑香。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">九鼎云英扬国粹，梦圆华夏步康庄。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">评：好律！擅长用典是本文之特色。大写意，大坏境之春秋笔法中，读者即可领略了作者深厚之文学底蕴。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">满怀仁术之节操，九鼎云英之胸臆，一如“吹面不寒杨柳风”婉约而多情。唐人诗风在字里行间宁静漫游，掬</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">一泓清泉吧！浇灌半亩心田，研红一方心砚。在首尾相应的律句里，医和曰，我们携手相约了橘井流芳的春天。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">4</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">摊破浣溪沙・大医精诚<br>
</font></font>伍见君</font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">亘古岐黄绽百花，解人愁苦自芳华。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">伏案经方陪夜永，暖千家。<br>
一指初平寒与热，多情复定正和邪。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">百姓康宁登海屋，爱无涯。<br>
</font></font><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">注：《摊破浣溪沙》一词之特点，即是《浣溪沙》之基础上于雁足处仄声断句，然后转一仄声字衔接，平声叶</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">韵。本词分上下阕，上下阕词律一致外，下阕一二句必须对仗工稳。本词阐述一个医者的心声，字里行间剖析</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">传统医学之道义，蕴藉典故而放达情怀，生命有限，而大爱无疆！</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">5</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font size="4"><font color="darkred">七绝&nbsp;&nbsp;赠医者</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,">卓丽华</font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">仁心父母古来亲，济世悬壶浊酒醇。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="黑体"><font size="4">问切望闻工艺美，桃花李树万年春。</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">评：悬壶之心，父母之情，望闻问切，平平淡淡的岁月里，皆是无私的奉献。一捧流香的杏花洒向天南海北，</font></font></font></div><div align="left"><font face="Tahoma,"><font face="楷体,楷体_GB2312"><font color="#000000">一滴滴心泉汇成了盎然春意的海洋。一首小诗，无限